Wraith Clan of Darkness Assassin
Number of posts : 671 Age : 29 Location : Shadows. Lurking, waiting to strike. Class : Shadow assassin. Experience : 0 Reputation : 0 Registration date : 2011-03-09
Character sheet Level: 5 Health: (130/130) Magic: (110/110)
| Subject: Shadow raze Tue Apr 12, 2011 2:26 am | |
| Name: Shadow raze
Cost: 4 mp
Effect: gives me the ability to solidify darkness and shoot out spikes of darkness to damage the intending target
Type of Ability: elemental
Element: Darkness
Damage: 1 per spike
Def Increase: 0
Atk Increase: 0
History: i was out by myself practicing my darkness abilitys when i accidentally made spikes come out of the darkness and nearly destroyed a forest when i finnaly gained control everything was torn up, and whenever i focused on one spot while minipulated the darkness a spike would come out of the darkness and hit the spot i was loocking at the better i go at doing this the more spikes i could make come out of the darkness i can combine this ability with my shadow of eternal torment(my blade) and Divine darkness (my armor).
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Vergil Leader of Clan of Darkness/1st Class Admin
Number of posts : 3120 Age : 33 Location : In his Mansion Class : Dark Slayer/ Dark Angel Knight/ Demon Lord Power Source : Demonic Experience : 32 Reputation : 5 Registration date : 2008-04-03
Character sheet Level: 1 Health: (50/50) Magic: (30/30)
| Subject: Re: Shadow raze Wed Apr 13, 2011 12:11 am | |
| ... I shall think about this one Wraith... it seems far to powerful for your current level. | |
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Wraith Clan of Darkness Assassin
Number of posts : 671 Age : 29 Location : Shadows. Lurking, waiting to strike. Class : Shadow assassin. Experience : 0 Reputation : 0 Registration date : 2011-03-09
Character sheet Level: 5 Health: (130/130) Magic: (110/110)
| Subject: Re: Shadow raze Wed Apr 13, 2011 12:33 am | |
| i was afraid you say that
alright i fixed it up i think thats better | |
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Wraith Clan of Darkness Assassin
Number of posts : 671 Age : 29 Location : Shadows. Lurking, waiting to strike. Class : Shadow assassin. Experience : 0 Reputation : 0 Registration date : 2011-03-09
Character sheet Level: 5 Health: (130/130) Magic: (110/110)
| Subject: Re: Shadow raze Tue May 31, 2011 4:31 pm | |
| is anyone else to look at this
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Eclipse Head of KHDR Insider/Admin
Number of posts : 72 Class : Enigma Experience : 0 Reputation : 0 Registration date : 2011-05-14
Character sheet Level: 1 Health: (50/50) Magic: (30/30)
| Subject: Re: Shadow raze Wed Jun 01, 2011 1:22 pm | |
| My understanding is the more your character grows the more powerful your character should get. To me this ability seems a bit on the novice side of things and should be an ability that is up to par with your characters growth. I would say give it a bit of a power boost as well as an MP Increase. Though it is ultimately your decision on how you want the ability to be percieved, I would suggest maybe applying certain "Stages" to your ability; showing growth in the ability as time permits it. I didn't get a chance to look at the not revised version of the spell so just be careful on what you add. If you like the way your ability is now I would say its approved, otherwise you may edit for additional changes. | |
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Wraith Clan of Darkness Assassin
Number of posts : 671 Age : 29 Location : Shadows. Lurking, waiting to strike. Class : Shadow assassin. Experience : 0 Reputation : 0 Registration date : 2011-03-09
Character sheet Level: 5 Health: (130/130) Magic: (110/110)
| Subject: Re: Shadow raze Wed Jun 01, 2011 2:59 pm | |
| thanks if you look at my other abilitie's you'll understand why it is the way it is | |
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