marluxia New player
Number of posts : 2 Age : 28 Location : castle oblivion Class : graceful assasin, nobody Experience : 0 Reputation : 0 Registration date : 2010-02-06
Character sheet Level: 1 Health: (50/50) Magic: (30/30)
| Subject: Graceful Dahlia Sat Feb 06, 2010 12:40 am | |
| Name: Graceful Dahlia
Type: Sythe
Element: Illusions and Rose Pedals
Range: Long Range Damage: 14 History: I abtained it when I got seperated from I true body and became a nobody and my true person became a heartless. I can weild it very easily and strike fast. I plans to use it in any way I can to take over organization 13 and become whole.I Can controls flowers, and uses my control to command beams of destructive energy from flower-themed minions and attack opponents with my massive scythe.
Last edited by marluxia on Thu Feb 18, 2010 9:44 pm; edited 2 times in total | |
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Nero Chevallier of Twilight/ 1st Class Admin
Number of posts : 2187 Age : 29 Location : Fortuna Class : Demon Prince/former Holy knight of the Order of the Sword Power Source : Demonic Experience : 0 Reputation : 2 Registration date : 2009-08-14
Character sheet Level: 12 Health: (270/270) Magic: (250/250)
| Subject: Re: Graceful Dahlia Sat Feb 06, 2010 12:43 am | |
| try useing i instede of he. that sounds better in my opinion | |
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Vergil Leader of Clan of Darkness/1st Class Admin
Number of posts : 3120 Age : 33 Location : In his Mansion Class : Dark Slayer/ Dark Angel Knight/ Demon Lord Power Source : Demonic Experience : 32 Reputation : 5 Registration date : 2008-04-03
Character sheet Level: 1 Health: (50/50) Magic: (30/30)
| Subject: Re: Graceful Dahlia Sat Feb 06, 2010 1:51 pm | |
| please add more history... maybe be more detailed in how he's skilled with his scythe. | |
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Dante Leader of the Chevallier of Twighlight/Head Admin
Number of posts : 1261 Age : 32 Location : Demon Realm (Owner) Class : Demon Slayer/ Tempest Knight Power Source : Crimson*Shadow= Divine Experience : 4 Reputation : 0 Registration date : 2007-12-18
Character sheet Level: 9 Health: (210/210) Magic: (190/190)
| Subject: Re: Graceful Dahlia Mon Feb 08, 2010 10:16 am | |
| Need more history; and please place your post from a first person point of view. | |
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